Original Footage from Mark Boam on Vimeo.
This was our first edit of the footage, i feel it works pretty well but things i would have changed are that:
- I would have added a fade in and out
- I would have liked for there to have been a longer delay in the action taking place's, i feel it starts off to quick.
- And if given more time i would have liked to add a voice over to add more of a story.
One shot First Edit from Mark Boam on Vimeo.
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